Apocalypse: Milfs collection! - Reviews

Writing Quality is standard, which sadly most novels fail to reach, with minor mistakes that the author seems to eventually fix/will eventually fix.Can't complain about the stability of updates, with chapters coming out quick and consistently.The story is developing well, it's not as slow as I was dreading but it's not fast either. Good pacing.Character Design is alright, minor issue of the character feeling shallow although I can't precisely pinpoint why that is. Perhaps it's because there is not much history known about the character and he doesn't seem wise so far however the novel is still new, got far to go and development could end up being able to compete with the best of them.World Background is mediocre at best, we so far know there are 2 worlds, 2 villages, 2 cities, a random kingdom the MC isn't in, 2 towns and a forest. We know very little about all of it by chapter 119 but as before the novel is still at the start of everything, it can improve.Sorry for the crude review, not experienced in them, just thought I'd give an honest opinion rather than "5 stars great novel".

Starts out nice with interesting kind of story.... but later on, mc just feels like plot device... probably because of writing....like...he has no personality or even a belief of his doings no goals no passions just doing his things and he'd be like "did it".There are many characters but they don't speak character. No actual events as I can see..  Basically I got bored because it's boring even my excitement got wacked down.

I read the beginning chapters and the story has some potential but the grammar and sentence structure isn't very good. It's hard to read and doesn't make much sense. I was completely lost when he was describing how he ended up at the gang in the beginning

Pretty good so far. I’ve never been a fan of the isekai fan but this is still good spin on the concept. For the most part it’s been pretty interesting and hopefully it continues to be interesting.

I have read the first few chapters and I can say is that the story is very interesting to read. Though I am not sure of the writing quality as it could use a little better. I highly suggest to use grammarly to improve your writing quality. All in all it has a firm plot and good characters.

the book is very entertaining and loving...

I like reading Kingdom building novels and when this novel started I thought this was one of the best KB novels on web novel  but recent chapters has been a huge let down. reading till chapter 350, the MC comes from a modern world yet has not shown any progress when handling diplomacy. I mean the way author has shown how diplomacy is handled by Riz or Rythium kingdom is very basic, even having a minister and ministry to handle external affairs they have not shown professionalism or handled things properly post war. Also why has author neglected the Spy network when crucial information about war and certain things have not been passed back to kingdom, the Inver issue was handled badly. Also the way war was won by being lucky is kinda let down. Hopefully author improves these things ( read other kingdom building novels if you have to).

100 years later, Way finally broke through and become a God Emperor, with many law and dao mastered. Although they are not as strong as a Dao God that gain the karma of Dao, he is still stronger then all other God Emperor. With his mastery of complete Dao and Law, he can fight a Dao God.

The younger looking elders all blushed as they glared at Chu Fan, still angry that they had no warnings prior to consuming his cooking. As they gazed at Chu Fan, a talisman flew past the group. This talisman was sent by Su Chow to summon the various hallmasters and current sect chief. Some odd minutes later, they all made their appearances and knelt.

"What's the deal with those giant… mosquitoes? They sure love being impaled. Do they even have brains?" Jeric fearlessly gapes at the teeming creatures for several seconds, and then makes a grimace the moment his gaze lands on the lifeless beasts with their green blood gushing down the interlocking concrete stakes. With a cold-blooded smirk, he undoes his powers, leaving his victims splattering onto the ground. He then scans the vast grassy field like a consummate detective. "This place is strange. Why are there circles all around? And… what is that? A table? And… is that an electric fan right there? What happened here? Well, I think I heard something striking the ground while I was driving…. But those creatures can't be the ones hurling those things… so where did they come from? This is so weird it's amusing. Wait…. I think I see people…. Right. Right there…." Jeric checks his watch and lets out a smile of relief. "She's really tough. Nice one!" He's about to hop into his car again, but another set of squealing beasts rush toward him. "Oh, come on! Give me a break! Can anybody tell me why they're so attracted to me? Seriously, am I that handsome?"

"Right, I came back home," he said as he sat on his bed staring at the wall in front of him.

''OK.i will allow it for last time'' Ray