The man character is a bit weird
The synopsis almost made me belive this was a romance novel until I read the whole thing
Descriptions need more work
Overall its not a bad chapter it just needs more polishing
Not bad, the main characters is pretty quirky but I like his character.
I feel like Rose still needs a bit more development but she's good so far, her reactions are pretty realistic. I like this novel. is this a system novel by any chance?
