Author is allowed to shamelessly inflate his own ego since there are bots that hate creativity on this site. Also I think it's a good story and I'm working hard on it? Yes I am
The writing is good, but a little cliche as it follows the much-used ‘Chosen One’ trope. The story is also a little too fast-paced. Also, I find the mother a little naive (or at the maximum a little schizophrenic).
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I wrote a novel recently, which is Call of Ring. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly.
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The writing quality is really good thou there might be some grammar mistakes along the way. It has a good plot and character development. Try it and You'll Like It.