An Omega In The Middle Of Mafia Interests - Reviews

Excellent work! Please keep on releasing new chapters...... This novel needs more exposure ................................................................................................................................

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It’s sad to say but it’s basically a dinosaur themed first order. There is some difference that I think it could be it’s own novel but the horrible time looping, jumps, and weird conversations take away from the novel. A good editor could fix this novel but I don’t recommend this for picking in its current state.

İts good story to read if you are too bored and are looking for funny and things to laugh. Story develops good enough and because its not always first character pov we can see reaction of others and it becomes more funny. Story's ending came to be shortened in my opinion it was too rush and i couldnt understand everything.Character also develops good enough and we see some ordinary figure to god like one. İts good story i recommend you guys to read.

This story seems to be a slice of life in a cultivation world. Story progress is quite slow and the daily life stuff is just too detailed. By chapter 20 I had already started skipping blocks of text looking for dialogs. By chapter 30 (raws)  the skipping got larger and by 40 I could no longer continue. It's just too boring.....

The Xua Tian Mage Academy, located within the borders of the State of Ming, on the southern edge of the Northern lands, was once recognized as the strongest in the continent of Zhuyin, and led the Four 'Emperor' sects. Even though it was still famous in Zhuyin, it had experienced a decline in recent years and did not maintain the glorious position it once had. Nowadays, compared to the other Sects within the continent of Zhuyin, it could only be considered inferior.

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        "good night."

Knock! Knock!

Darmenia calmly prepared to help her, began to prepare everything necessary, Muss watched her terrified from a very uncomfortable position.

Hearing Joe's thought make me think the same way. Most of all this little boy interests me. I will form bond with Joe giving him the [Raven Magi faith] skill.