An eternity with you: A Takamori fanfic - Reviews

pretty normal Chinese cultivation story involving transmigrated person, low quality translation and edit. I suggest you don't read this novel.

Give this book a try if u want to read a novel full of misunderstandings like "Losing money to be a tycoon". It has good humor and somewhat nice characters with an MC whose goal is to become the greatest antagonist and the world hell bent on preventing it from happening.

Good stories. Have been following it from RR..will be one of the best original novel in this site.. great character development, interesting plot, although sometime quite confusing with all the timelines, but worth the read.. so this review need more than 140 words, hoping that I have write this review more than 140 words.. goddamnit QI..

Because she was in shock I had to make her recover her reason when she finally came back she looked at her seriously

"Let go of me!" the Darcsen shouted as he kicks Luis "Let go of me you racist piece of shit!"

(Oh well, forget about it for now.)

"How come you forgot you're own birthday?" Seokjin-hyung.

I Appreciate your work you are a great thinker and has immense potential A great story.....one must read

Hi shameless author here giving review to his own novel. i hope you guys can give it a read as this is my first novel (read it with an open mind). if you have any comment and suggestion you can let me know via comment. The story is not like any typical transmigration novels you will find out there. if your looking for a new change of perspective but still wanna go for the transmigration genre then you should definately read my work. Thanks Peace

It gives this eerie vibe and brings reference from this world into reality, the writing was great, almost too great which is strange, the words you use,love it, and that name , you should probably do some cover art but I love it.

This novel kind of reminds me of the old books' style of writing—everything feels rushed. The concept is great, the story is great, and the idea is amazing. The family relationships are fine, and I dislike heartless MCs, but why, just why, is it so fast-paced? Give us time to see other people's reactions and developments.You have Fang Ming and Mr. Brown creating the most advanced rifle of the time—cool, even perfect—but then, suddenly, contracts are secured, and many are sold just like that? Come on! Where are the generals' reactions? Where are the soldiers praising it? Everything happens so fast it's hard to keep up. Reading this feels like a detective novel where you have to stay completely focused, or you'll be lost entirely.