An Apocalypse System's love story - Reviews

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Hey it’s an ok story, to me nothing really stand out on this on ,, it’s your usual novel about mc cause of not awakening power get bullied and somewhere down the line somehow he is gonna awaken his power and probably get an op beast  and take revenge on the one who bullied him..    update schedule that’s a 3 cause 10 days go by with no update so it’s random... chapter length are really short like 9 page of nothing so far 25 chapter nothing really happens in the story....  it’s your average book you can read to pass the time if you have nothing serious to read....  the title of the book ruthless dragon god hey if you wait long enough for around 500 chapter  which is gonna be around 2028 cause of slow update,  MC might become one...

first of all i know my english is pretty bad but deal with itlets split the review in two parts. the firstpart are chap1-48if you like storys with are like written ****  with cultivation to make it look better then this is your story atlest its one of the better ones of its kindafter chapter 48 the story makes the mother of all nosedives everything exept the humor dies painfull i will put in some exampellsbut there are stong spoilers SPOILER DOWN BELOWexploding dickserosuu tipexplosion oh i allmost forgot he ****t his grandma she is 120if all of shis dont bother you then  this is  the perfect story for you

Mano why don't you make a novel without a system? Is it too difficult or creativity doesn't exist to think of things that make sense that really make the MC strong and different?????????????

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Lucy's Pov

"See you again soon..." huling sambit ko at tuluyan nang umalis sa condo unit niya.

"No buts! The decision is final. You know well my Ideology of combat. Defense can better protect everything around you than offense. It also put into him my desire to keep him safe, and the ability for him to pursue the path that best protected his love ones and everything he values.

Although she was six months old now, she could hardly make an intelligible word fly out of her mouth with her horrible lisp. It wasn't fun for the mentally 22-year-old to revert to a baby again and have her every action dependant on her parents. Food? Need parents. Milk? Need parents. Answering her natural calling? Well, she didn't need her parents for that. She did need them to clean up the after effects though. She nearly went insane from having little to no control over her bladder. However, the thing that upset her the most was her new body. She had no control over it at first at all. She couldn't even move her fingers! How pathetic is that? The genius martial artist who beat the most renowned bodybuilders and martial artists with the strength of elephant yet with the grace of a swan. Now she was just a duck drowning in water. Better yet, a squawking duck that couldn't even do the most simple of sentences yet. Well, her mother had a physic connection with her beloved daughter so it didn't really matter.

With a satisfied smile, Namjoon opened the door for him. Jin walked to the other side and took  the driver's seat. He ran his hands over the wheel then placed his hand on the gear stick.

"Why is the son of the Last Ronin such a pussy?"

I am a beginner