Am I developing feelings for my family?? - Reviews

I like the novel is nice to see an MC different from the rest one that was not a loser before everything went out of ****, volume 1 can feel somewhat overwhelming on some occasions but in general it is a great story, I hope from the heart that does not end abandoned c:

Well I am the author, so I will obviously be praising my own novel.Anyway, before you read my novel, I would like to explain some of the characters and background of the novel.The main character is Tang Yin. I prefer evil/villian main characters. Therefore, Tang Yin had been portrayed as a devil who only cares about himself and Xiao Fei. (If you decide to read the novel, you will find out who she is.) He will do anything that suits him, including killing innocent people for his own gain. He is similar to Fang Yuan from Reverend Insanity.The background is a traditional ancient Chinese setting, so basically a wuxia or xianxia cultivation novel. However, most mc in wuxia novels are righteous and have a harem. I don't want any of that, i want the main character to focus solely on himself and Xiao Fei. In my opinion, the writing quality is very good. This is my first novel, so there may be a few minor grammar or spelling mistakes. Please forgive me on this aspect. The way I write has been shaped by the various novels I have read. These novels are: Reverend Insanity, Monster Paradise, Let Me Game In Peace, Warlock Of The Magus World, Birth Of Demonic Sword, Pursuit Of The Truth, Renegade Immortal, A Record Of A Mortals Journey To Immortality, Martial Peak, Bloodline System. There are a few more, but i cant remember.Also I will be releasing at least 2 chapters a day, sometimes a chapter or two extra if I have a lot of time and get immersed in writing.The story development is alright in my opinion. There is only one plot with an occasional plot twist here and there. There are no 2 plots mixed in together as I thought it might get confusing. If there is any type of plot you would like me direct some of my novel to, please let me know and if i find it feasible, ill implement it in the novel.If there are any mistakes or suggestions you would like to notify me off, I will be all ears. Thanks for reading this comment.

Pretty nice for a first novel, rating should be a 1, but giving it a 3 just because of the dedication.That being said, its kinda sad how you show no improvement from start to end(most recent chapter).

I was really scared while reading the book.                                                                                                                                                        

so I don't normally do reviews or leave comments but this book so far has me hooked. I really enjoy how the author does the reincarnation and doesn't make the mc super op right out the gate. Can tell that mc will be op as story progresses and that there could be a few love interests in the future. really looking forward to how this story progresses, keep up the good work

"Bloody pervert"

She tried to cover herself but her hands were not enough. In the end all she could do was to look at him, tears falling down her lovely face.

Mana Power thrust lvl 3

Azon: well of course i did not read those books for nothing.

A baby lay on a small bed, it looked like it was around 6 months old and was found guilty it to be a boy. The boy, who's name is Lin Qin, was slowly opening his eyes only to see a small room with barely any furniture, even the bed he lay on did not have much stuffing, and made his body ache. When Lin Qin completely opened his eyes he felt a heavy pain in his forehead and suddenly his mind went blank.

[Notice!] - The shop function is only available for a limited amount of time. After reincarnation the shop will only open whenever the user reaches certain level milestones. Some abilities and objects will also be suppressed until the user reaches the age of five to avoid overloading their newborn body. Exceptions will be basic bloodlines, and only one bloodline will be available per person. Depending on the bloodline chosen, to avoid unnecessary complications others will ignore any abnormalities as a result of said bloodline.

"What?"