ALTERNIVERSE (Original Short Story) - Reviews

This book is amazing, keep going!  Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

"Why don't you be a good b*** and sit down" I'm dead Alpha moon is about to put in the work on Osiris she not ready lol. Great chapter been waiting for a new one. And can't wait for the next.

Bro.....BEST FIGHT IN THIS ENTIRE STORY, My boy Zero is putting up a good fight. I feel like he still has alot of potential to unlock. But that will come with time. Also electrified needs to chill out and work like a team with zero. But as always great chapter and thanks for the early release. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]

Great chapter, love have the development is going so far and how the heroes are being smart to join forces with the vigilantes. Cause transmuter and his group ain't no joke lol, also happy birthday my buddy may you continue to post more draw dropping chapters! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Infinity stars for this chapter. I'm happy alterniverse is back in action. I enjoyed the back story and history that was showed from the gods and how we basically now no who Korthax really is or who he "reformed into". But yeah I almost had to hire an assassin because I wanted to rear these stories again. The author is very fortunate he posted a new chapter when he did. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Look out the vigilantes are making their move! But awesome chapter cant wait to read the next one (I wonder what Hexens power is). [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Loved this chapter, got to see my boy zero have a little more screen time and also learn that not everyone is a hero for the same reason, also can't wait to see how aqua reacts when she goes to the realm of gods.

I want MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
But yeah this chapter was dope someone has to help B.A.D out, like without him noticing. That way transmuter won't notice. Phineas is a vlown as usual lol. Also I need to see more on Zero, Jin, and That vigilante that hates zero. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Loved the chapter. It was very detailed and cool how Transmuter was helping all the villans escape. You could also see how much he cared for his old partner and crew. With all these prisoners free I fear our heroes will be in some trouble...

I love how you went back to the earlier chapters to show us what how Nuclei was alone for all those years and escaped the glass pod, eventually saving aqua. This story is going far and I really hope others give it a try. [img=update] ❤❤❤