Alpha’s Unwanted Fat Mate - Reviews

Loved the characters model and the world background is interesting.....and minimum grammatical errors, that's what I like and the silent kid Arthur Is good addition.I like it.

im not really good at making reviews so all i got to say is this is one of the best concepts for a story and has one of my favorite main characters so far and i hope it gets the attention it deserves (yes im getting on my alts to review to show that i am sorry and hope it gets more people to read this)

everything is ok but i am not a big fan of [god or his follower] type novels. i like more of mc who is either solo or with companions. but still its not bad novel so far, just not my cup of tea. and yes this novel is unique in my opinion.

Ok it might not be good for your phone but don't rate the story bad just cuz of that just move on to another story instead of just hating. I like how he actually is trying to be original and doing this different type of book. It works perfectly fine for me to translate online to text so keep up the good work author and don't let the haters get you down

FIRST PARAGRAPH GOT ME HOOKED. I love this genre... I love the dystopian genre in general...Now I can see the clear reason this book clicked on me as soon as I read it. Kudos. Kudos. Kudos. Kudos to the author!

World building is so good. Although there are some cliche parts it's still okay for me. Mc isn't winp. Worth reading

Not bad at all I liked the ending it was good should have continued a bit to it though but other than that I like it and completed the story

This novel is an outstanding piece of literature, compelling from the very first sentence to the closing one. The author’s storytelling expertise shines in the richly developed characters and detailed plot. Every twist and turn kept me hooked, making it impossible to put the book down. The prose is both eloquent and easy to read, painting vivid pictures that immerse you in the story.

Lily sighed as she asked. "What memories do you have of that week?"

Lau closed his eyes as he laced his fingers, "about ten years before lord Damora came into being, but I could not find anything about why your family and lord Damora have conflicted. It seems that some other power that's not the gods is keeping it from the world for some reason."

Jack' okayyyy Umm Status??

"I won't back off just because some Mairyan dregs sent an assassin," the king said in a righteous manner to his advisor who was advising him to evacuate. His voice was loud and audible to everyone. "They kidnapped my daughter and now came to kill me? What a joke! Am I such a pushover for them?"