Alpha’s Betrayed Mate - Reviews

Oh! I'm a bit sad coz it's already locked. But, the story's really good!!!!?? I might not be able to read it as often as I can but I will try my best to read it! Aahhh, my heart!

It kinda starts slow but it gets better, as author said it picks up at chapter 16. Though the update stability is kinda slow, thought I can understand since ur a student. The writing quality is really good.Description of things, buildings and the environment is also good.The fight scenes is the ones that I mostly enjoy, that’s why I read action novels. Keep up the work tho:). Looking forward for future chapters.

Alright I love the concept of this and wish that there was some peir editing, but not going any further on that subject. I was just wandering if there is going to be anymore chapters or if it is being posted somewhere else because I would love to continue reading this.

FINALLY we have a good novel with PLOT  from this author...this novel has a well balanced scenes of fighting & r-18 & romance & cultivation...Its also about a reincarnated of great sword master who will do anything to become stronger so no one can bully or look down on him...Mc still is acting immature and not thinking with his brain but his lower body sometimes ...And considering this author is already writing 3 novels at once,  the release rate of this novel is good.But recently i feel author is trying to put this novel on drama route...But in my opinion it's a well written novel which has worth spending time over it.

Yeah, gonna be honest, I can't tell if the author of this story is terrible or if the translation is just terrible. Maybe both? The story says one thing then like a paragraph or two later it will contradict itself. If it was a one time thing it would be whatever, but this seems to happen constantly throughout the story so far. I didn't even finish all the trial chapters because it was so bad.Pretty sure some of it is on the translation as I think a character randomly changed names. It's my first time seeing a scoreboard concept so I guess it has that going for it, but that's not really enough to make it passable.

this is very good. I hope the story continues                                                              :                      .                   .

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"Jiejie is truly glad to have meimei as my sibling. *sob*. Meimei, no matter what people say, even if our statuses are not the same, Jiejie will always love you. In Jiejie's eyes, you are not a shu[2] sibling but my precious meimei."

Shen Threw a roll of paper in the pit and grabbed the match. He shakily started the fire and got the knife ready… The more he looked at the raging flames the more he started to cry. He wined and wished that he could just go home to his family, but nothing seemed to pity him, he could only put the knife halve into the fire and wait for it to turn red.

So far i am loving it.No red flages or anything that seems off to me,but that's my personal taste. Feel free to judge for yourself.There were some grammar issues at the beginning, but i believe they have been resolved.I didn't double chech, i dont care about it anyway since i read mtl from time to time.

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story is very good..  pls don't Stop the novel