Alpha: First To Rise (Updated 2024) - Reviews

the story and character development are amazing but what makes this story incredible for me is the detail you put into the beasts. the only problem I have is that thw chapters are a bit expensive.

I really enjoyed the story, since he's gaining followers he should give them the white karma and adopt them into his clan.So yeah so far so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????

The stories plot is original and interesting, although there are a few things that could be improved upon, such as grammer and character details. I find that there have been some consistent mistakes like when the author uses sense instead of since or when they use do when it should be due. The author also could describe the characters appearances in more detail because some times I find it hard to picture them. These are the main short comings of the story that i've found but besides that i've found everything else enjoyable such as the personality of the protagonist who is strong and reliable and the plot of the story. The giant monsters are really cool, especially the city bosses. ?

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So here’s my review after reading eight chapters. Let’s start with the technicalities: in terms of grammar - there’s little to no errors; pacing - just right. The way of writing is new to me, especially the part where the author narrates as if I am the one in the book — that is an interesting way to write. However I’m still not used to the manuscript type of writing. But that may be preference as well.On the other hand, concept is intriguing, as well as plot. Well-researched also. Characters have depth. Nothing much I could really critique. Keep on writing.

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So far, I really like it. It have human experimentation ,reincarnation, superhuman mc, and a mc who wants to live simply. it's   that I am not really into dark webnovels but this webnovel got me hooked. For some reason I kinda feel like something is missing? I don't know what but can the author try just once to find it.

Hey jewels, we are over fifty chapters and our journey is nearly ending. Drop a review if you enjoy the novel. I'll be glad and grateful for your unwavering love and support throughout my work. This is the hardest fantasy novel I've ever written. Love~twilight

I'll give it 1000 out of 10! Normally, for this kind of novel that we actually play in a game's world, we have to follow the rules and play along with it. But this Duel World Online game is over my expectation as well as exciting in almost every chapter! I rarely know about the result when the protagonist battles because there're lots of variables for victory such as combo cards and unexpected events. At the end of the day, this is one of my favorite books in my library. <3

No words nor gestures could get through her.

The Outsider's Marks come out of my eyes and become makeup brushes, 'Holy shit it worked!'

My condolences and thanks for the chapter