After finishing the first volume of the story, I can finally give my work an honest rating.
1. As you can read from other reviews, the start of the novel is one of the best things I've ever written. But the pace afterwards is a bit sloppy.
2. I was too focused on developing the future plotlines of the story, I forgot to pace it properly, which I took care of immediately after realising my mistake.
3. I can say with surety that things improve later on (as you will see). I just request you to have patience while reading the first volume of the story.
4. the Second volume is where the story picks up and I promise to make it one of my best works ever.
Thanks for reading!