story is fine. its too kid friendly. everything is lovey dovey. after 20 chapters u could get the sense of a herem of 2 girls and maybe more in future. like what the other reviewers said the main character is pretty stupid, not an idiotic way but his world view. I'm stopping because I don't want to see alot of things go ridiculously smoothly and uninteresting development. u could say it's because its an iseki, but like come on be out side of the box and be more realistic.