I'm starting to read it now, but due to the comments, I'm looking forward to it.oh...140 I'm starting to read it now, but due to the comments, I'm looking forward to it.I'm starting to read it now, but due to the comments, I'm looking forward to it.
"I hope someone will take care of you" Pharsa said. She leaves the baby with the white dove who will always guide her unti she became ready to fight the evilness in the Arcania....
I think it’s a great book that need little to no major corrections but maybe introducing a new side-character that has some unique connection to Master Magi. One minor thing that I think you could add is his Dragon Horned Rhino evolves into a ‘purer’ form of a dragon and gains some special ability only for earth dragons. The last thing you should keep doing is adding the snotty rich kid type that get always seems to get whooped in the end. Its been great reading this book and I hope you add a second part.