Afton: The FNAF Musical - Reviews

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This book is very good. It is mislabeled as Eastern Fantasy, when it is infact Magical Realism and Horror. A very interesting read so far. La la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la ?

Hum?!

She stared at him angrily before a hand reached out and rested on her shoulder.

'What is the Sun?', he asked himself the question, 'And the answer to that question lies in my ', Karna frowned and rubbed his eyes with index and thumb fingers.

"We're saved!"

        Pinaandar na ni Rain ang sasakyan at nilabas sa parking area. Dahan-dahan lang ang pagdrive niya kasi alam niyang lasing siyang nagmamaneho at baka mapahamak niya ang buhay nilang dalawa.

"I'll go get her," Catherine got up then stopped, "I'll asked for her," She seemed to correct herself. She walked to the door and called a nurse and told her something in german. She walked back over to the bed and sat down next to Victor, "Do you think he will walk soon?"

(Author: naku wala ahXD)

Suddenly someone came in running saying that the city Lord has been poisoned, they all ran towards the city Lord, he was coughing blood, suddenly Lin forced him to the ground and punched his heart ,the city Lord vomited a lot of blood ,the eldest son tried to force Lin away.

Tears ran down her face as she peered into the studio door. She can't help but feel as if her heart had shattered into a million pieces as she saw him kissing her.

In my opinion, if this novel is continuously uploaded, it has a lot of potential to grow, and the background of the story is very good in my opinion, if it continues like this, it will be great.