There is no justice here in Africa at all. My friend donated his kidney and they gave him 2 million dollars . I came with 12 kidneys and they're now calling police for meme.
It's bland. Wow. MC GETS TO CHECK IN TWICE FROM TWO BLOODLINES! SO OP! SO GREAT! It's really important as his check-in ability is limited? Not really. It doesn't really matter. He checks in every now and then. It's basically overpowered MC without comedy or real motivation to exist...
So many 5 star reviews, but man this novel is completely makes the MC act more like a demon rather than angel. Not only is this story bland, but this is already on the road of trashy average cultivation novels. The MC is both a demon and Angel but all of his actions make him out as more of a demon and no angel. Rather the MC is a human with evil tendencies since apparently only his demon side speaks out to him while his angel side is no where but dead on the ground.
there is nothing good about this novel. its boring, a cardboard cutout of whats already been done before but there is a twist, he gets two rewards per check in, one for each bloodline. which makes of course no difference, like one reward through check in wasn't already op enough.
i'll give it two stars. for those that have never read a check in system novel before, this might be a great story to read.
Read the raw to around chapter 50~ and it’s already very boring.
Spoilers head
So that fallen angel chick he has enslaved is actually the daughter of Lucifer.
His childhood friend turned out to be some super powerful war angel on more powerful then the seraphim.
There was this goddess chick that destroyed a world willing became MC’s slave.
His foster mother turned out to be some ancient super weapon designed to kill super god, a god that’s more powerful than the god of light and dark.
There also this half dead angel whose sole fragments he absorbed became his master, which I strongly suspects would also join his harem at some point.
At the point where I dropped the book MC is aready killing demon emperors.
At Chapter 50~! And only a few years since he was born! So many coincidence in such a short amount of time crammed to tightly at a single point is this novels flaw.
Was excited to read it, only to see massive plot holes everywhere. It was simply unreadable. MC's strength fluctuates everywhere for no reason, nothing he has is ever explained. Idk, just don't read it. Save your time.
The first few chapters are great, but as the story goes on there are many grammatical errors and the worst part is that the power level of every charcter is changing.
In one chapter Davis's power rank is demon lord rank nine and in the next cahpter it becomes demon lord rank 7.
Ther is also Fiona who's power Principality Rank 4 and then in the next chapter it went all the way down to power rank
