After the Villain Gave Up, the Female Lead Started Chasing Him - Reviews

Congratulation author..the best story i read!

The mc turned evil too quick. It said humanoid not only humans so ogres goblins and other card summons could have worked.                  

interesting but nationalism npc opinion and hierarchism... would probably spoil ..............................................................................

Dialogue and scene progressions are honestly quite terrible. Wish fulfillment fantasy is whatever, interesting premise, but very poorly executed. author needs to do more reading to improve their writing quality.

I was reading it and noticed that he used words to tell a story. just wow, didn't know that could be done. props to the author for this amazing discovery and use of the English language.

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Nice novel. The story beginning is quite interesting.  Mother dying on son's arm isn't that rare but it's emotional.  Not only that the revenge plot going makes ur blood pumping and u want the xu family get extinct.  Anyway,  writing skill is good but dialogue is the best.  Anyway,  keep updating the chapter. And read this novel, it is worth it.

This novel is good but I HEAVILY recommend you to read this during the day as there some horror elements and I pulled an all nighter out of fear.

Soon enough, the warm golden glow of the runes subsided. Lin, practically glowing (again) in excitement turns to my father. "Father, I have opened 51 meridians,"

"Two coffee" She ordered without asking me!

     A sense of peace flowed into her, calmness and ease overtook her overworked body. With a sigh she closed her eyes and let her mind wander as the quietness of the whole room filled her senses, allowing herself to be more aware than she ever thought possible. Feeling her mind reeling with thoughts, she found herself thinking about Iris again. The dream that she had, the feeling of importance never leaving her thoughts. An image of Iris standing in a clearing with a beautiful lake and trees surrounding it with a single look back, Iris smiled and walked into a glowing door that appeared out of the nowhere, disappearing along with it.

"Whatever." I hit her shoulder playfully.