After The Child's Mind Was Read, The Tyrant, With a Dark Face, Dragged Out The Male Empress Dowager - Reviews

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As of chapter 47Writing Quality: 4/5Some spelling and grammer mistakes throughout the story. However this does not spoil the story and can be easily understood despite the minor mistakes. Story Development: 5/5Despite only being 47 chapters so far, the story development is interesting. The fact that the author plays the role of VR extremely prominently is nice, but it would be more interesting if the MC backstory was shown as well. The battle scenes are done really well in this novel. The fact that the intro of the game (trailer) gave the storyline a strong foothold is interesting as other authors tend to not use such things. This is very unique to this story so i give the author props for implementing this unique dynamic.Character Design: 4/5This takes into account that the novel is only 47 chapters long so far. There is little background information on the MC. How well to do his family is, etc. (there is some information but not alot). The side characters are not really evident at this point besides the female lead (potential love interest). Only some names are being thrown around here and there without any interesting or distinct facts about them.Updating Stability: 5/5I do not know the stability of the update as I read all 47 chapters in a day. I just place 5/5 as I consider it stable until further notice.World Background: 5/5The trialer of the game provided a good base for the VR world background. This is done better than most other novels. However, since this is a relatively new novel, there is a lot of room for world background expansion. I hooe the author can continue on this path as the expanaion of the world's background is exoanding at a nice pace.Overall: 4.6/5The story is really interesting and one that I will continue to follow. This is one of the better newer novels on this site. I think people should pick this up to read at least until this point. The MC can be considered overpowered in some manner (compared to other players), but the content is still really interesting. Hope the author continues to work hard on this novel ?

Great LN, Do yourself a favour and read it!Btw, why has it stopped updating? I know it has already reached volume 14, but only up to volume 4 is available on webnovel.

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I read this on royal road. Saw he transmigrated to here. Lol. Writing grammar is raw...but good imagination and entertaining overall. I figure with a dedicated editor he would do much better.  Do give this a read. Just bear with the writing grammar.

PLEASE PUBLISH THIS ALREADY!!!!!!! Although I don't know the reasons for this novel to be dropped, I still believe that this novel should be given a second chance. So please start translating this again, I BEG YOU!

Its a nice story good story development, design and backround but i am super dissapointed to the updating stability 3ch for a week....................

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With that I threw both hands in the air in defeat. Kids have no say in life, after all. Thinking positively, now I would have the opportunity to beat up Theo during sparring sessions. I was actually starting to look forward to group training.

Jeff: Well, Good luck!