After Seeing the Bullet, the Fat Wife’s Original Self Awakens - Reviews

I wish the author would pick up this novel. It's great!

Now webnovel start to understand what we want to read, thanks for the novel, now I need the raw.140characteres 140 characters paralelepipedo

I honestly stumbled of this story by accident and im pleasantly surprised, the grammar is up and down at times but its very negligible The world building and character development are some of the best ive read in quite awhile will leave you wanting to know what happens next ar every turn.its definitely a must read so take a chance Im genuinely surprised that this isn't rank higher as I've seen some novel who lacked the execution andOriginality be rank higher but to each his own i gues

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It was as odd as Rouge's power as it simply told me what I needed to do to accomplish my desired goal so long as that goal pertained to a set limitation. All in all, it let me know that neither Roman nor Neo had any intention to stop me should I try to run.

I love this, I read all pass chapters in one go to this point. The heart strings have been pulled all over the place. AUTHOR MORE PLEASE!

Of course, it had to be him.

The muscular man quickly catched up to Cheng Yang in a few steps, and tried to strike up a conversation with him.

Everybody looks at me and then at the White Mage guy then shrugged, but they still looks confused. Oh boy, I can't wait to hear the rumors that would inevitably come.

You're bundled up now, wait till you get older

It's really good, please don't drop this, I want to see what happened next

The beginning of the novel is good. Your approach of making the introduction(chapter 0) philosophical is intriguing.As I read further, I found the build up to be good too, even though I thought some things were odd, but that didn't affect the quality and flow. The scenes are interesting and that seems to be your strongest point so far, like, you are very good at writing moments. The problem I had in the middle is how much of it was "filler". A decent bit of it was character information and skill information (system time) that didn't really move things ahead but rather slowed them down and broke my immersion.I can't say much about the character design since there's not much to go off of. Most of the beginning was action and it's in the most recent chapters that you started  showing his initial disposition. I guess we'll see...