After I Awakened The System, All The Goddesses Chased Me - Reviews

After I Awakened The System, All The Goddesses Chased Me
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I just love the Hojo Emu cover random stuff to full up word count sjsjdhdhdbdjdhdbdjdidjdjdhdndkdndkxndjdjdjdjdjdbdbjddjdjdhdjdjdsjsjsjsjdjdj
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Please try and pay attention to the tense of the words you use, some of your sentences are incomplete or too short. As well as some words are misspelled, but overall still understandable and thankfully your pronouns are good.When did and why does Shiyuki have a crystal heart? I thought Shiroe was the only one to have one, because it was an experiment from that 'woman' that their grandmother gave permission for her to experiment with Shido?Thanks for the chapter, looking forward to the next one!!!View More
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The synopsis attracted me and the story itself made me stay. I really love this novel and the chapter release rate of the author is also so fast. Please don't exhaust yourself Mr. author and I really hope the novel keeps going. I will not talk about the story as its just better to go and read it instead. I'll be just spoiling the good fun.Keep up the good work!
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Nice stuff                              
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Very good hostoriabme love the development that is having and more than anything I hope that it is not abandoned I see how incredible the story will be if it is not left abandoned for me is very well raised, I want the development until it stayed
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just dont drop this bro....................................................................................................................thats all
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Oh, your second book, Senpai? The title is really eye-catching and the first few chapters had a nice balance of comedy and zombie apocalypse going on. This is going to be a good novel!Keep up the good work author!
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Quite the smooth read that engages the reader. I am expectant for the next chapters. Noice. Keep at it, hon. I will hunt you if you ruin it~ ^^
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Clearly, I'm heavily influenced by editing this novel ;p Still, I had to make a review since I'm a harcc0re fellow reader xD I've been working on the novel since the very start, you can say it's my editing baby. Along with it, I'm growing up too, and striving to improve. Let's get things straight; it's not your every day post-apocalyptic novel, you won't find too gruesome scenes like other novels of its kind. Several times, the MC looks like a NPC game character, he's not that talkative but that's what makes him special. He just shows things through his actions, he knows he is weak and he strives to improve. Some people may not like his decisions, but it's still being elaborated why he didn't do something. Some people complain about the short chapters, I on the other hand, not because I have to work less - on the contrary I have to work more to rephrase some lines in order to make the reader 'feel' what's taking place, prefer that the chapters are smaller cause they're not that repetitive and you hardly want to skip lines (once again that's how I feel, you may have other opinions.) I will agree that it resembles dbz fights, but you can still wait for it to pile up and binge read it later, at least that's what I do with most novels ;p Last but not least, I find the concept really intriguing. I mean, a car that can be constantly upgraded? What will it become next, an air-carrier, a spaceship, a Transformer, Gundam, Power Rangers' Megazord? There are plenty of choices ;p That's all I had to say till this point, if anything changes I'll update ;p Thank you for your feedback and your support for the novel ^_^P.S. The updating stability is top-notch, we haven't missed a chapter ;p
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Brandishing his mace, Leo blocked the strike, but the heat was unbearable.  Leo retreated a few feet only to attacked again. A flurry of claw strikes and mace swings collided.
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"What is this, where am I?" I told myself I was about to start scrubbing my hands in my eyes, but when I lifted them I noticed that my hands were dark and thin with pointed fingers.

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