After Death She Got Transmigrated!! - Reviews

Over rated. Too slow of a phase with the story, too OP (ch 15 already had godly skills), low IQ MC (doesn't use his hack every time), incomplete description of levels and whatnot...

Started reading this on royal road and got hooked. Everything about this story for me is top notch with different and interesting ideas. Also the book is not too slow paced or fast paced and is at a great valence. The Grammer is amazing compared to all the other original webnovals that I've read so far on this site and I can't help but wonder why the hell this isn't rank 1. Gonna stay with this story for as long as I can and anticipate every chapter. I also can't help but love your work ethic when it comes to this Novel. The love you yourself seem to have for this story really shows in your writing. This has also inspired me to start writing story's. I respect you and thank you for this and my future doses of CEDS

So far, This one had me laughing. From, 90th's time's a charm, to his pissed father, to his classmates and teacher roaring in laughter. This does need editing though. There were also some tense slippages, but all and all, I was absorbed into the world you set up. If I can picture it, the scene, you've got me.  Added it.Are you going to publish this?

buena obra de ficción. una buena historia y buen argumento. Recomendado

"Guys! Quickly lead it over here!"

As Bhumi looked for Dev's mother, a girl passing by stopped near her and spoke to Dev, "Hi Dev, recognize me?"

"Why would I stop you?"

"I'm the new person who is living here with my roommate now and why is there a girl in the boys dorm" I said glaring at kinji him sweating bullets.

'Oh shoot what am i gonna tell doc as a reason.....? Maybe let's try stuck in traffic today , will see what happens later.'

Kapag naaalala ko yung parte ng pagkakakilala namin ramdam ko pa rin hanggang ngayon yung weird na feeling. Akala mo kinukuryente ka na ewan. Lalo na pag babanatan ka pa ng awkward na linya na tulad nito.

Sometimes, some extremely weird events happened in the Hueco Mundo, like the birth of a Vasto Lorde, or the death of one.....

Overall I think the story is still in its starting stages so I can't say much. Great work at the first chapter making his interaction with his dad really cool tho. Keep going