The start of the story was very promising. However, it gets a little sloppy as it progresses. Just a little tho.The plotline was unexpected, the story was short and had little major events happening here and there. (Not enough)The fact that the first Supreme demon trampled on the MC and ML on his feet so easily for his personal goals made me very agitated but atleast the author proved that both MC and ML was not OP. Oh wait, the ML is OP, it's just that the first Supreme demon was a million times more OP than the ML. The ML's power was unreasonable unlike the villain that had logic behind his power. Seriously, the ML just transmigrated, only his soul was supposed to remain and not his cultivation. He did not even cultivate when he obtained countless treasures nor did he use them to raise his power.This could have been so much better if some world building and more adventuring was added but it seems that there was only two places where the major events took place? The capital and the foggy forest (I forgot the name) I think.I guess the author didn't want the story to be complicated. Meh, I was just thinking of the endless possibilities that could have made this soooo much better. I'm a perfectionist so don't hate me for my rambling.
