I am just going to say, what you need to improve. First of all, remove the stars from the word, it will not make the word bold, it makes the writing gibberish.
Second you need to adjust the word length of a chapter 1500-2000.
Third, the story is good, but you need to change the MC name. Or in the future, many people will troll you.
Because the name you are using, it needs to be overpowered.