Chapter 573...i liked the novel i read 500 chapters in 2 days doing nothing else...but this getting ridiculous now.Why is he always fighting? Just because its a cultivation novel u cant keep him in danger all the time and no it doesnt make the story more exciting it makes it draining on the reader. U need to have a few good chapters with story in them in between acting as a buffer. But here the guy just keeps fighting from 1 place to another..and always so pathetically weak? When is he actually going to get strong? At the last chapter when the novel ends?
overall I really enjoy the story the characters keep you entertained and on your toes the only problem is they can't keep the gender straight in the storyline they keep swapping everybody's gender around and it's quite annoying
This needs to be finished. I hope that Webnovel does the courtesy of allowing this novel to be completed. Even though this is different than butterfly blue’s other novel, this is at least worthy enough to allow the last 170 chapters to be done.
You have a way with words. Thank you for spending the time to write this novel. It’s truly beautiful. I don’t remember the last time I read something this good. It’s quite amazing, and I hope you publish more things soon.
It was good till the start of the pest chapter not a fan of parasitic things that drain the MC and speak inside of his head Even if it will be usefull later on. And worst thing is you tie them togerher rather than getting rid of it
Pretty cool story, and I'm not too into thrillers, it's an over all interesting concept. Other than your grammatical mistakes, and poof choice of words here and there, it's a good read.Keep up your work, and practice english a bit ;)
very good novel!!.............................................................................................................................................................................................
