Good novel fits my taste, dialogues need a bit of work but all things considered, it will attract more readers if you remain consistent. Looking forward for your work.
Keep up the good work. The power system is interesting. The fights are amazing. Work on the characters design and develop story to garner more fans man.
The story is interesting, it is something new than the things that we see in the fictional world. It has potential but there is a lack of update in the chapter. Please publish the next chapter soon.
