AD3LINA - Reviews

whew...nice nice last chap

I'm really loving the story. It's new from all the stories I have read. Highly recommend...

Need more chapters

Started off with a very self aware MC of the cliches in urban novels. While the writing did more telling, instead of showing, I really wanted to give it a chance.It only took about 13 chapters for him to forget all of that and embark on arrogant, very cringe face slapping. Kudos to the people who kept going to chapter 100. 20 was enough for me.

Si estás leyendo este comentario tus padres morirán dentro de 5 años. Para deshacer esta maldición necesitas copiar esto y pegarlo en otros 5 manga. Lo siento, también me maldijeron, no se puede subestimar la maldición de personas al azar.

So far im 150 chapters in and I've learned that China all around is an extremely horrible place to live just my opinions I mean besides being black and always having to read about people make fun of the MC for having dark skin and the corruption of how doctors who are ignorant get in through connections and how you have to give a doctor more money on top of the already expensive treatment fees if you want them to DO THEIR JOB CORRECTLY and the constant peer pressure of ruining your lungs by smoking and the misogynistic views of women not to mention what china is doing right now to Muslims/people with middle eastern looks china would be DECENT but you know to bad all of those things are how the author describes china or are something that has been shown in real life also the MC is a bit dull he has no motivation for better things in life which is really unrealistic in this realistic story he constantly gives away half to 1/3 of his pay to people that don't even need it for "cultivating good relationships" and for half of the story half the stuff he has is borrowed from some rich lady IDK I just feel like its another one of those cookie cutter MC's that basically only have 2 emotions or do 2 things without caring about other things which is a bit retarded cause no matter how long they've lived they'll still have desires and for some reason none of these mc's on webnovel whether it be realistic or fantasy genre don't have basic human nature apparently they've transcended that or for some reason just because they got a system their self control or reasoning is better than millions to billions of people sorry for my rant but yh this story is pretty good I do hope to see MC get married and have a kid.

The story is pretty good so far, I've only read 40 chapters at the time of this review. The mc acts as he was portrayed to be in the introduction so there are no problems there. The world background and grammar usage are pretty solid as well, nothing crazy but it is good. My main gripe with this novel is the way the author handles time skips. Time skips are a staple of the cultivation genre so its pretty much expected that there will be some, the problem though is that when time skips happen in this story it feels like time only moved forward for the mc. Ex: Mc does something that would create trouble for the country he was in and flees to another country. While in country number 2 there is a time skip of several years after which mc returns to country 1. None of the consequences of the mcs actions at country 1 have played out during the time skip, but after mcs return the consequences suddenly start playing out. Personally I think the author needs to look at how he handled these time skips and correct his handling of them at least with whatever time skips come later. If possible I would suggest he goes back and edits the early chapters and make a couple changes to the story so it doesn't seem like things only happen when the mc is around. I'm not saying that he can't only focus on the mcs perspective because there isn't anything wrong with that, just that things should be able to progress even when he isn't physically present.

Loving the story so far. The frequent updates and lack of a pay wall are godsends! The only reason I didn’t give World building five stars is that the mc’s previous world seems kind of undefined. I can’t tell if it was a modern world with slightly supernatural martial arts, or it was a cultivation world and he was just low level. This isn’t a criticism and it’s entirely possible this will be fleshed out more soon. Regardless, this story is a gem among all the trash I normally sift through, so thanks for that! ???

Story development is none here in this story. I just get the feeling that author just dump anything he want into the story. There is no real setback for mc. Every problems are solved rightaway when it become a problem.The character design is plain. The characters' personality is like an air head anime character. Mc looks like a kid who gets the power and wants to play hero.World background is so so. Mc keeps getting teleported random place for no reason. And those places were to easy for him and existed to unreasonable upgrade mc skill and to get more girls into harem.Lastly, I can't get the direction of the story. Even after 55 chapters, there was no main story line for me to hold. The feeling of reading this novel feels like a japanese novel where mc is OP from the start and all matter in the story is how happy his life is with numerous girls....

The novel isn’t bad or good it is meh and it is filled with typical bad translations errors and it is confusing because they constantly swap between the realms calling it 3 or 4 different names in the same chapter

Intresting novels thrilled by reading waiting for more novels to release.Amazing stories imagination gives an super duper excitement for the upcoming novels

Her uncle said he will help alina if she needs help vs the s rank intruder and nooow all of the sudden for drama, he cant help her cuz they can only help if the intruder is z. Which also makes no f sense cuz its not against other humans but f intruders who want to destroy humans like w t f. For reals are those authors even thinking, i understand some minor errors if its 100ts of chapters in but its chapter 16 and already massiv brainlagging author so frustrating cuz it happens like in every f novel. In new worlds like no world buildign at all, world trees  couldnt think about solutions a human mc can come up with  in a span of couple hours.how did this get 4,5 stars i will never understand rly 1 of th worst novels.