Acid Rain - Reviews

Yo, I’m going to say it, this is the next RSSG. The this book is really good. Everyone has to give power stones. I’m already hooked on this book? only thing I can see, is that it’s missing some elements to make the book more full.  It dwells a bit empty? Idk the right words but I’ll write another review when  I find them

Love the concept and idea. no one ever uses Otsutsuki clan XDkeep up the writing, it is nice and smooth, and it is hard for me to find a nice fan fic. this classifys as good for meso keep up good work XD

You writing a new novel??!!! Then what about 'A warrior's path'? Will we still get updates??!!! Need answers. Gooddamng 140 characters rule!!!

I like the concept of an MMA fighter's reincarnation, who is already trained in combat, can't wait for more chapters.

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"Is this what I think it is?" James asks himself,

Habang naghihintay ng reply niya, i took pictures of the place pero hindi pa ako nakakadami ay nakapagreply na siya.

he said while looking at guss who directly nodded and said: young timothy I will ask you here and now do you want to become my adopted son?"

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

The ice we skate is getting pretty thin

It’s an interesting concept but the chapters are way to short, about an average of 50 words per chapter and I feel there could be more

Writing to get an answerForeword: what im going to say is constructive critisism not hate.Im at chapter 54 now and really enjoying reading it so far, but i feel like when you are describing several thing be it monsters or people the descriptions seem so lacking, like i get not wanting too many words becuase of word limit and price, but it dosent really take many words to give a bit more of a detailed description. For example where im at noe is the part with shadow stalkers and weavers and the description of the weavers is fine i have envisiond what they look like, but same cant be said for the shadow stalkers, with the very limeted/lacluster description we got from them i cant for the love of me envision what its supposed to look like. Im saying this because i want to keep reading, and for all i know it might improve in future chapters, but so far it pains me because i love painting a about what im reading when im reading, with this now(for the most part at least) im unable to do so.