ACCIDENTAL TRANSTEMPORAL TRAVEL - Reviews

When i started reading this novel, it became more and more interesting with the MC's developement, but as kept reading on, the author seems to completely scrap all of the MCs development at the start of a new arc. His stats also dont match his abilities, and many of skills are ignored as if they never existed even tho they did 100 chapters back.The fun parts bout reading this novel is about his development plans and how his mechs are used in battles, and even tho the "intellect level" of the MC is high, he keeps doing the same stupid mistakes over and over again, not improving them or getting worse from them. The arcs seem to continue on for 30-50 chapters and only 7-10 or so of those chapters are actually part of the story, the rest are just word count/chapter count requirement. I have to stop reading this novel now, cause the author has already detracted from what makes this such a good story.Thank you tho author, it was a fun ride, the first 100 or so chapters.

Didn't find too many mistakes, the story is addicting and gets you hooked easily.It's about a fatty who does game testing for a living while part-time streaming,He got into game testing after getting fired (he got bullied there --> it's something that reflects on his personality).Apocalypse started when he accepted the invitation from a mysterious game company to beta test their new game "World Simulation". From what I understood, it's a game about surviving at the end of the world.What's most interesting about becoming a beta tester for this game is that reality starts becoming more and more like game (the game has real time feature, bug fixing).In conclusion, from the 20 chapters that are out, I rate this novel as a 4.4 with 4 in writing quality (didn't see any gramatical erros, but english is not my native language so what do I know), 5 in stability of updates (2-3 chaps a day), 4 in Story Development (didn't give it a 5 since I don't exactly know how it will develop), 4 in Character Design (the characters feel real, but I'm a loner so don't trust my word for it), 5 in World Background (don't know why I gave it a 5, just move on to other reviews or start reading the book).

Very fast paced story which takes the story from broke to millionaire in just 2 chapters. Completely illogical story development with some many plot holes that my mind aches just thinking about it.Overall, it's an interesting concept and had great potential - but as usual, author fails to deliver. Fast paced story, glaring plot holes, illogical characters who don't question anything around them, and the list goes on. I hope some other author can do what the Chinese does best and steal the core concept, while giving it the attention to detail it deserves. I genuinely find the thought experiment of "what if you could invade the dreams of other people" interesting - and I really hope that someone would thoroughly explore this in depth. Please hit me up if you do.

This new version much better than the old one, Chen Li didn't become as heartless as before, and that's a good change.

The *** scenes are good, but the characters and plot are poor. The story could be better. Also an exact explanation of why the main character was chosen. But you can guess why she was chosen.

Hi, everyone! I've already read the first book of this novel in Italian language and I really Love it!I can assure that the story will gets better and better even if it starts a bit slowly, it has a truly unique plot so if you are looking for something different give it a try!I think it's a must read in my humble opinion! :)

"Tell big sister you name, I'm Eudora, you can call me sister okay?"

"Well, that happens."

It was neither rough nor soft, it was just right and their bodies moved perfectly as warmth poured down on them. Their mouths didn't part for one second as fingers dug into soft skin, whimpers of pleasure vibrating against their lips. As soon as he felt everything tightening, Jungkook pulled out and wrapped his hand around slick members, stroking them carefully so they could reach the high together.

[Gen: Appear my steed, come to me, Dragon!]

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