Abyssal Ascension: The Dual Chronicles - Reviews

A all together well that thought out novel with very minimal errors in both grammar and spelling. Overall the system is very good and non of the arcs are given enough time to slow down the plot or become stale. A little OP from the get go with his system but overall a fantastic work by a phenomenal author.** More Chapters Plz

Nice story. Amazing teacher-disciple dynamic.I love the trope subversion and how the mc is completely different to most novels of similar genres.The story seems amazing and has a lot of potential.The MC's current love interest is also completey unique and never seen before. Their pure relationship cannot be compared with any other know examples.Keep it up King BiBiKAlso if you have time check out my novel RotA and leave a review. Thanks.

For anyone who is from the south or has experienced southern culture, you will relate to the mc. He is a principled, family driven, and responsible black man. That is the best way to describe him without spoiling. His powers only allowed him to better act upon those traits. The writing quality is great. The character interactions are always a great thing to read. They feel like family. I love this book and I suggest you give it a chance.Warning: you will learn some southern slang reading this ?

Dear Author, I'm a big admirer of your writing! After reading your book, I was blown away by your talent. I have some ideas on how to take your book to the next level and expand its readership. Would you be willing to listen to my feedback and suggestions?

The students all gulped and were very hesitant to move, but were going to comply anyway when they saw a golden-haired figure march confidently right past them and walk straight into the room!

I couldn't move because my back was yet to activate. I now thought of my body as a piece of old machinery.

"Hmm iya sih ra"

Lv 1: 20/100

"I just...don't really enjoy talking bad about people...even if they're errors," I said.

Sorry if I got your hopes up but no I'm not continuing this story. I did try to continue it but I forgot what I wanted to do with this fanfic.

This novel is pretty good, I haven’t found many problems.  The flow and writing style is pretty amazing, I am not really a fan of female lead books.  But for my friend I’ll read it.  Keep up the good work ?

Loved it! The historical setup is awesome, while the concept is refreshing and new  looking forward to new chapters Kira!