A writer's new toy - Reviews

Can a person be too good at his craft? I'm starting to think Lumydee has it set out to bankrupt me (my poor coins)...Even after I told myself, I wasn't going to read it, the temptation was too strong, luckily it seems he is vacation this week (hopefully), it gives me time to save up, lol. This novel like all his other novels are addictive, so reader beware!!! Once you start thus novel, you will be hooked. Enough of the chit-chat, I need to get back to King of Technology, hopefully that can tide me over long enough for him to update the rest ?

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I'm only at Chapter 80 but here goes:Translation Quality: It's good and mistakes can rarely be found unless one nit picks continuously.Stability Of Updates: Hasn't been updated in a while but it was previously good.Story Developement: Ok I'm in no rush for the mc to become powerful quickly but 80 chapters in, he hasn't changed and while the focus isn't on him alot, I feel like he should have become more powerful than the average human already and he barely does anything, most of the work is done by Bei Li with it starting out as a gag but slowly becoming annoying.Character Design: The character design is really unbalanced, while some have interesting backrounds, others exist for the sake of existing and if they were side characters it would be okay but some areheavily focused on. The worst is the mc, I tried to like him but it's impossible as he is supposedly the descendent of the king of Beiqi but he does NOTHING and relies on Bei Li who is the only really good character.World Backround: The world backround is really interesting as I can't wait for the Underworld Seas to be explored but at the same time, slighlty more focus on the real world as it would be interesting to see the authors take o how humanity developed in 200 odd years.I don't review often but needed to say this.Thank You

Great story background could use a little more detailing like what year they are in and what the continent/ world they are in is called, I haven’t seen any other problems with the story it’s great every other way just needs a little more background knowledge

A BL novel that's actually tastefully written? Heck yeah. Even if you only came for fluff, you'll want to stay for the really good storytelling.

Was it abandoned? Is there any news about this story?

'I need to do research whether or not all that is true or not though. Otherwise, I would just lead to a new war without knowing shit.' Hati thought, convinced to help them if he could assure himself that he got to know the whole truth.

"Nn?" Nightingale turned her head in response to see Tyre's frowning. "What of it?"

Half the militia stood on the pier watching helplessly as a bright yellow Yawl sailed away. John waved to the crowd and blew kisses at the ladies.

Yoona kembali mematung karena kini Sehun membaringkan tubuhnya di atas kasur. Dan yang semakin membuat dadanya sesak, Sehun kembali mengepungnya dengan cara berada diatas tubuhnya. Menatapnya tajam hingga menusuk hati dengan lembut. Lama sekali, hingga tak terduga, mata Sehun perlahan memerah.

Arcane - Time : 0

As of now, the remaining assassins only amounted to 8, and all of them were looking at him with horrified expressions on their faces. They instantly began firing at Lin Feng, but he disappeared from his spot and silently appeared behind another assassin, his sword separating his head from his body.