A Weird Revenge NTR System (Beta) - Reviews

Love the story and the main character. Few writing mistakes here and there but overall pretty good. The flow of the story seems to be at a good pace to me with a enough story building and action mixed in well.

It is such a great story. It is like bringing a farm to another world but more focused on capturing animals and things to upgrade the world which I love. Keep up good work

while they were lounging in the great hall, Raizel looked towards the shore and said " I sense two that are of my brother's blood, how is this possible Frankenstein"

I could not even formulate thoughts.

Right then, some leaped into the air majestically, before splashing into the water with a girly scream.

I closed my eyes for a moment and took a deep breath to calm myself down before trying to figure out what the heck just happened.

"Minami Sakurai," Euphie said, still smiling disarmingly at them. "I shall remember that."

So gonna write frog 2 sooooon ??❤

Bwiset kasi yung babae, ang bagal bagal na nga tumakbo, doon pa dumaan sa guard ng simbahan, muntik ng mahuli kasi nakatunog na si manong. Edi ako naman itong si gwapo at mabait tinulungan siyang makatakas kaya ito ako ngayon at namomoblema.

After driving some more time we finally reached my home. And got inside fast before anything happens to discuss about what to do next.

"aku di beri tau oleh ibuku kalau dia memang naga petir selama ini dia memang inngin menguasai hutan ini dengan apapun caranya akan dia lakukan tapi aku tidak akan dia menguasai hutan ini karena ini adalah hutan suci dan bukan hutan yang mengerikan, ibuku memberitahu semuanya dan aku tidak akan membiarkan dia menguasainya"

"What? Like my present? I thought you would need it soon anyways sensei."