A smile that hides the knife - Reviews

The reviews make this seem great but all the 5 stars are bs.  I’m barely on chapter 4 and there are already hella problems. 1 problem is that Jack disrespects the KING AND WALKS OUT OF THE CASTLE AFTER “convincing” A GUARD?  Even if this is a fantasy, that’s already BS.  And on chapter 4, Jack doesn’t want people to know he’s a hero but when the branch leader yells out”. Hey Brat!  Are you the hero?”  Jack yells out “yeah, what of it?”  This sh*t already made me lose so many brain cells and it’s only the 4th chapter

I’m literally on chapter 5 and I’m hooked. The best thing about this story isn’t even the characters or the world building, it’s the community including the author. Just reading the comments as I go has me dying laughing.

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This is very Interesting and new concept. I will like to see how it going to evolve in time. We need to see the chapter 2.Nice work, Mate....

I think this might give us our best shot!" Naruto said without any hesitation... he had great confidence in his plan

"Kubilang pergi!"

Sensing the change in Cram, God spoke "Have you finally came to terms with your Death?"

[Command received]

Felgrand: Cute... The Central Alliance wants someone to paint the fall of their rotten world. When I heard that the Mage Reaper killed both Agnes and Zeros.. just Zeros alone might have got me out of my throne.. but for one man to kill off two of the deadliest men I've ever known. Well it's simply principle to meet him at that point.

You're bundled up now, wait till you get older

"Ronnok get in on this!" he cheered in a joyous mood. Zalaria nodded in agreement with Soryn wanting to see ronnok getting in on the fun.

just what i was waiting for, finally I can have something fun to read , and I hope this lasts longer then your previous once