A Second Time - Reviews

This story isn't anything special,if anything is very below average! The MC is to much of a "hero

Eu precebi que o autor esta reescrevendo sua historia e devo dizer que fiquei emocinado e feliz por tal feito...Os personagens eu amo ainda mais a Esposa Yandere e Tsundere Perigosa, minha preferida...Eu acredito que com o tempo ira melhorar assim como sua gramatica melhorou enormemente e a contagens de palavras aumentou...Estou satisfeito,espero que continue assim

This is a great story. 10/10 If you like magic try this one out.

Very good..... Nice writings...All the Best karthikeya...Hope u succeed in ur life for sure....By ur sister....................Good luck....Achieve more n more in ur lyff...U should get more n more Victoriess...

Such a Epic Story with realism. can't believe. this is so compelling. enjoyable!! too long to read ?. are more chapters are coming to this Epic??!

I saw 4 angle there they are seem powerful.

(Tyler)

Hati just sped forwards while following a scent and aura he caught after thinking talking to the old Kira.

"Saya berharap kamu ke depannya lebih fokus terhadap saya, mulai besok saya akan mutasi seluruh sekretaris ke bagian pelayanan umum, biar kamu saja yang melayani kebutuhan pribadi dan perkerjaan saya bagaimana?

Chacha:"Ara kamu kenapa"

Once I finished crying, I felt annoyed. A man that was a total doofus had played with me. A player made me cry. I can't accept that! I just can't. So I stood up and had a real warm shower. The only things that are good right now are the free rent apartment that I'm staying in, cheap healthy food I buy from the markets, friends I made through work and that I have a comfortable life, financially. As I finished my shower as I thought of these things, my mind kept going back to William. What could he possibly be doing right now? Is he thinking of me?

A clashing of ideals that competed for War's favour.