A Second Shot At Happiness - Reviews

Mc's way too much of a coward. He never takes risks which makes it boring. Low-profile is okay but you gotta step up sometimes you know. Such a bummer

every sentence is followed by pic related drivel, interestingly enough this filler driver almost never has any mistakes, hmm. so can you stop this author. your grammar and writing quility is at best 1-2 stars and magically this filth is atleast 4. I don't know if you are copy pasting it from somewhere or using ai but its nothing more than padding. so please stop

Last update was August 2019. Then no news fron author. Don't waste your time if the author is going to drop this novel. And why translator didn't check the update stability before choose to translating this novel??

this novel is amazing but you ask why so low rating? because this novel author  used brain to write instead of copy pasting like Lord of mysteries.

Translation Quality-4Stability of Updates-5(Can't really give anything else since this is trial read)Story Development-3(Story develops similar to LoHP, if you are familiar with the previous author you know where certain actions of MC are going to lead to.)Character Design-3.5(I like how the author decided to try a different approach to creating an MC. All authors try to make their MC seem clever but fails, here the author genuinely states MC is stupid and proves it with his action. However the reason I didn't give it full points was there are so many cliche character trope from authors previous novel.)World Background-4(Another unique world system of cultivation, that doesn't annoy you with the typical cliche cultivation path of meditating and power up.)Everyone come here expecting a power similar to LoHP or an MC like Zhang Xuan. However, this book isn't like that. The author is aiming for a completely different story. To be honest, saying that this book is the work of the same author as the library of heaven path will be the main downfall of this book. Don't expect him to be clever and smart like Zhang Xuan.  Although there are hilarious events there and then, the MC is completely stupid. When I say stupid, he is sort of like the guy in your class who has the worst grade but is good at certain technical applications.The only thing that can be compared with LoHP is the cliche moments in the story where you know what is going to happen because you have read LoHP, such as him saying I am not going to do this, then few chapters later he does it and face slaps everyone who was *****ing about him.Translation quality is good so far, didn't see many problems.Character design- I have stated this above. Just remember when reading this, don't expect a clever guy. Zhang Xuan found the best way to use his cheat but this MC isn't like that because he isn't smart. The way he goes about to figuring out his power paves a way for a hilarious situation if you are new to reading books. However, if you are an experienced reader, you will find the jokes lame and annoying and sometimes wonder why the author made the MC so darn stupid.There are many used tropes from LoHP, but overall it's not too bad so far.World Background- This is a unique and different world, where the power system works very differently from the traditional cliche meditate and cultivate. In this world, one needs to be clever and be able to do insane calculations just to start 1st step of cultivation not to mention fighting opponents. MC's cheat just lets him skip the calculation bit of the cultivation and go straight to practise.

The story has great potential, the authors writing style sure is creative and the flow is so natural through each read. And ofcoz there are few spelling errors but that's something that can be fixed. Overall this was a good read.

What a nice story! I cannot wait for the author to update the novel.????????????????????????????????????

Wow, the story is captivating from the start! It feels like you are really inside his world. Kudos to the author. You nailed it! Can't wait for Luke to achieve his goals. ??

Next she briefly explained what he should do, each dungeon has a set of rules imposed by its creator, the rule of John's dungeon would be as follows.

Pulling her eyes away from the forest, she looks at the water. It seemed like any other river but if she looked deep enough, she could see something sparkling. Tilting her head slightly, she reaches down into the water. Wrapping her hand around a smooth object, she pulls her hand back to take a look at the thing that caught her attention. Her eyes widen slightly.

I open my eyes...

I feel like the clamping of her anal becomes stronger by 30% (三割増し)