A second chance at vengeance - Reviews

Good story, 40 chapters in then stopped. I hope the author/translator picks it back up. Story plot and boosts seem to be moving pretty fast though.

I'm sorry but this is a terribly inconsistent novel, I understand it's a fictional story but it has no logic or rythm eating a magical beast that weighs more than a ton alone which takes 6 people to carry it (not even  goku can touch him) then he needs money for his younger brother to learn magic but when hunting magical beasts apparently they are too low level to collect  ( their value is not less than 3000 gold) so he leaves about 8 of those bodies behind. It's an ok novel for those who just started reading light novels but I honestly wouldn't recommend it to anyone try, I shall seal the heavens.

Rip off of 80 years signing in at the cold palace basically but it’s Still kinda fun The translation is garbage                             

i just starting reading this novel and is good so far----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

the novel is great, but really a shame that chapter 50 and upward the chapters become pay2read, guess this is the end for me ciao ciao...............................................................

The plot is astonishing, and the characters and the situations have been written very well, This book is full of surprises! Good work author! Best of luck

the book has great potential. however, it is in desperate need of someone to proof read and grammar check. almost every paragraph has issues in that department.

theres not much info about the world he is in but this novel is good im getting excited once he got a good 3 sword xD and im waiting what kind of body did he possess it did say he's body is special

"Do you have any suggestions?"

Yeah, I wore my cloak over my pajamas. Today seems to be sunny so I decided not to bring an umbrella. This building is kind of spooky, not like ghost spooky, I mean like people who live here are nocturnal even me, all of us here have night shifts. So in the morning, this place looks deserted added with dead silent corridors.

The previous flames from their eyes were gone replaced by a everlasting hollow look towards the sky as if calling the hevens to come down and end their suffering once and for all

Finally some of them spotted me and one who looked like the leader approached me with a tired face.