A Salty Wish - Reviews

What a ride this novel has been. Emotional,heart tickling and beautiful. Keep up the good work author, your writing truly amazes me. Best of luck for future work.❤❤❤

Read Previously on MTL 94chaps and Dropped. Here is my review after reading the MTL......... "story is kinda good, Mc is OP But I don't like the fact that every single enemy MC Fights they always Underestimate him even with All the Clues/Evidence/And Stories about MC Power they just tend to ignore it just because they Think There can't be anyone Powerful Like that, They Know About the Immortals But haven't seen their power, Yet they tend to compare mc to immortals saying even Immortals Can't do what Mc is doing so It must be fake news. everyone only believe in the concept that if I didn't saw or heard about This Kind Level of Power Previously then this Power is Fake And doesn't exist at all. Its just brainded and Dumb to read for me.. i get frustrated reading this again and again..

Who the hell is Keiji!?... Isn't the mc name Vlad and Scott?... I don't mind about those naming sense(Klyzer and the other)..... Well the plot is good at least(Even thought he was supposed to be old monster but those cliche... whatever).. also the heroine development was too hastened... Overall it's good... just good no more or less... In my personal opinion

Okay goodGo more updateI always support you.I suggest MC must be large brain hole for use the sistem. Not ***** MC. Not Willy development.

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I want to feel love. I crave for it. But my heart just can't feel anything. Its so cold that It doesn't feel right.

"Nothing, just eat your food" she said and gets up "I'll check on you later" she walks out.

Roaming about the room aimlessly, she didn't find any clothes laying around in the room. However the only place she didn't look was under the bed.

Royal Navy

" My, my, I'm quite surprised the Guild Master of Merchant Guild is a woman. It must hard to achieve unless some one backing you behind the scene. " ( Daphia )

I called out Growlithe so that I had companion and to be secure from wild pokemon attack , As I'm headed towards her place street lights glows and lighted up the street but not that just too bright , I saw some Ratatas searching for food on the garbage bins , I heard some loud cries from Noctowls and Unknown Ghost type pokemon. I don't feel scared because my buddy ( Growlithe ) is here walking with me .

You'll never shine if you don't glow