A Payment to the Mafia: His Little Obsession - Reviews

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This is my review in this story author-sanPlease don't drop this story please pleaseplease  please  please  please  please  pleaseplease please please..Its good.

The novel is written very well, starting from the MC, the world around him, even to the love interest,  the novel is also action packed, it definitely suits the "ruthless-mc" tag, as he's very interesting.I can picture out scenes very well, the words just come together perfectly. Given it 5 for writing quality. for the stability updates, the author always has a note after his chapter, and I think hes updating frequently and on schedule so 5 for it, for story development, I would rate it 6/5 if there was a 6 here, because just from a few chapters its beggining to become very interesting already.For character design, the MC is just my type, he reminds me of some manhwa MC that ruthlessly kills ant in some island, so im liking him vert much. As for the world, its interesting so 5!Keeping this to my library!

a good story and storyline but the needs to finish the novel seen many good novel that is not finished always please finish the novel and just write at your own pace

I love this novel but the slow update rates r killing me??

I'm really happy for the new chapter,though I didn't like the part where he tries to match the  protagonist  but i really like it , thanks for new chapter

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A typical MC in his journey from desolateness to realizing his dreams in a world where Swordsmen and Mages are abound. Lost his parents at childhood, cheated by life and almost tired of living. Until his first contact with magic...

The story plot is awesome. As the name suggests the Hero is a curosity freak type character, something new that I haven't found even on Webnovel.No noticable grammatical error or mistakes found good job author.

This story is different from any other I've read. it's not only creative but also properly executed. Thus far I've loved reading it, and will continue to do so.

The story seems really interesting so far. The character appearances and how they interact with each other is perfect and well since I’m a fan of gore I’d read most of the things that are gory yours does a quite good job. Keep it up and I’m looking forward to the new chapters

novelmu jelek penulis, terlalu banyak kekuatan untuk dunia seperti game of thrones, ditambah setiap bab terlalu pendek, dan cerita berkembang terlalu cepat