Not a bad way to pass time but not even 5 chapters in we see the first plothole. I decided to review after reading all the free chapters out currently and that isn't the only issue, so many things are just never explained like how the MC's main class went from unarmed to cultivator or when he upgraded it from apprentice to silver rank. The series is called my magical system but the system is actually called the soul system that uses soul energy and he is a Cultivator not a magician.
For some reason, they hung their head low -- as if reflecting on their activities in the past year. Seraphina sighs heavily, then turned her gazed back to Victor Wang's distorting face. She spoke,
Release that witch.....................I'm sorry its "release that man"HahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaOuch ouch my stomach hurtsDamn this 140 character limit
You have strong and great concept to work with, it felt pretty original, but the grammar makes me lose some of the immersion sometimes, but looking past that, I was able to enjoy the mechanics of the world you have built, keep it up!
