A Love That Began And Ended In A Look - Reviews

Want to just give a standing ovation to the author this story is a hidden gem for its genre. I usually don’t give many reviews but I really enjoy this type of genre and the story just flows so well. I love that the system doesn’t seem so intrusive and just serves to complement the MC. (Ps wanted to get this review in before author goes on temporary Hiatus to show some love) Thank you so much for a great novel ?

If I wanted to read Harry Potter I'd go for the original. This can only be called watered down fanfic attempt at mixing multiple stories into 1. Author also added the whole concept of hunters + a test that has the prerequisite of finding the place. The MC hides class in 1 chapter because it's important for safety, then goes and reveals it to random person on the other, just to again choose to hide it a few chapters later. Don't waste your time like I did!

My only complaint is the MC's almost dismissive attitude or lack of genuine respect towards his disciple. Xu Yan works diligently dedicating himself to Martial Arts cultivation so wholeheartedly, how could MC not feel guilty of bleeding him dry?? ? I feel bad for Xu Yan for having him as a master

Nice one. Need moreeeeee. Mass releaseeeeeeee and thank you. Long live exp sect. Hahahaha??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

Other reviewers are expressing concerns about Mad Snail's update pace. I can't speak to that, but the story itself is a hodge-podge of half-formed ideas. It reads like the author had a bunch of ideas for a story in a VRMMO and just sort of sprinkled them onto a template without considering how they interacted with each other or how to give any one idea enough focus to breathe.

Introduce the club and history at the start it's situations, the timeline should have been the first thing mentioned. the transfers and the amounts are unrealistic. the timeline is completely off there's no mention of when Ferran, Lewandowski or Gundogan were signed. the author forgot that the season began late that year because of Copa America and Euro.

I enjoy this story and I would really give a 4.5 or higher rating if only the update was good. I have already waited 2 weeks or more for a new chapter but it hasn't arrived yet. So please let it update soon! I am desperate to know what happens next.

Till now I liked the book. Writing quality is good and simple. The lead characters are strong. And the story is really unique. Waiting for the new chapters.

Name: Luo Fang

Trace was confused at first, before realizing, "Oh, makes sense. I can't have things happen half as slow for me than it does for everyone else, or at least it won't let me."

"I think we should go there, what will they think, "I said.

Giving the officer a non-threatening look, I inwardly sighed about how this was going to be troublesome, "I have family I need to rescue over there. You don't need to worry about taking responsibility if something happens to me; pretend I was never here."