a love story in the city - Reviews

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I like the opening plot of the novel. It shows pain, love and determination. The novel altogether has a nice plot. Keeps the readers on their toes and making them itch to find out more. ??

I’ll say it is a pretty good R 18 novel, and although in the tags there was netori given but until the chapter 6(latest chapter) which I have read there no netori so I’ll say it not pure netori. So people who avoid netori can also give this novel a try. Although this novel is still in it’s early stage it’s pretty good(because I don’t know how the future novel will be, so I can’t say awesome or anything). I have felling that it can achieve good success in future and I hope that I wouldn’t be proven wrong.

Its a one shot story thats has good character choosing.                                                                                                                                                  

John turned away from them.

Did Ace unconsciously already thinks of himself as a part of their family? It can't be! Ace wants to kill Whitebeard as a proof that he is better than Roger.

Sky:' I look stupid right now but I don't get it. '

「Eh? You will be charging money?」

"You already did and in an unsightly way too." At this point, Lucifer spoke again before turning to the fourth elder.

'Why won't they have a table?!' Lin Xu complained internally.

"Oh Lilith, what's wrong?" Light asked, who just woke up from the bed.