A Gorgeous White (BL) - Reviews

Seems to be pretty similar to the " Scoring the Sacred Body of the Ancients from the Get-go" novel that appeared a long time ago. I personally am a sucker for this kind of novel where the MC is OP from the beginning, but if you aren't into that kind of stuff this may not be for you.

Nationalistic Propaganda..

Review time, 19 chapters.MC transmigrated into this world where there are beast tamers. Humans in a precarious situation. blablabla, cliche background.Mc has a SSS-rank nuturing talent, so as long he has enough resources he can grow any type of beast to extreme levels. Any nuturing beast tamer or in general (forgot) has a sort of storage space in their body where the beasts will rest. Sort of like a pokeball.The higher your talent the more space you would have. Due that mc has SSS-rank talent the beasts in his space will grow 256 times faster than normal.Mc has a normal functioning brain.Translation quality: 5* (as always - didn't seem to find anything wrong here)SoU: 5* (as always)Story Development: 3* (Plot is the same)Character design: 3* (no soul, no emotions, just a blank page full of cliche designs)World background: 3* (Again, stolen template, you can already guess the background without even reading anything but the title)Overall score: 3.8Personal score: 4.0 (It's actually pretty nice, I wouldn't say at the top of these types of novels but still entertaining to a certain extent. Give it a try - you're bored anyway if you're reading trial novels)

It’s kind of like the beginning of ”Kumo Desu ga, Nani Ka?”, in the way the story progresses. He eats, sleeps, and levels up... into a more powerful being.. Yes it’s that simple, but maybe it’s the novelty of having a weird grasshopper MC that the story doesn’t get stale at all.

The most important point for now, in my opinion, is the quality of writing. There are many mistakes in the sentences, for example words that are missing ... It is difficult to understand the story in these conditions and it could discourage many. I therefore recommend reviewing your sentences before publishing the chapters.

gggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggvgggggggggggggghhhggggggfggggffffffffgggggggggfffgggffggfgff

This novel i read from the start and i quite like it one of the best part is twist that in chapter 20 i like it ,i very exited about the next chapter

A great story overall. One of my favourite ones on the site. Start of the story is really interesting and well written, the character development of the MC and Arza is brilliant  as well. Rith and the comics could do with more background but I'm sure thats coming later. Really enjoying it so far

Little did he know that as she was having this crisis in thought, he was having the same.

"Like I said I've known him for about 4 years we went to school together when we were little, anyway I didn't expect for you to believe me I just wanted to let you know, but it's up to you how you take it"

I moan. "To be honest, terrible, I was out with Steph again," I tell him, which makes him laugh a little annoyed. "I'm sure yours was a lot better, how's Dakota?" At the mention of her name, he smiles all over his face. And I realise that I did not mention Noah's visit on Saturday. Landon tells us about Dakota's application to a ballet company in New York and how awesome he is.

"That's him." Said Crystal grabbing Liz by the arm excitedly.