A Fate So Cruel - Reviews

The whole thing is very fluffy and all.

a day of joy changed to a day of sorrow with the snap of a finger... damn

I started reading this but stopped after a few chapters because of the lack of spaces between chapters, and first-line indents. They are an eyesore and really affect the flow of the story. I suggest author format it properly.

Read all your stories, loving it! Giving all my stars vote for this book!