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A dead man's eyes
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Authors writing logic becomes bad as the story goes on like 99% of Trial Trash .. I mean Trail Novels, even thoughthe fist few chapterswere interesting but sadly it becomes more and more unrealistic as the story goes on.And with unrealisticI don't mean Mc system, I mean the story world logic...............................
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The story proluge is good but please fix the skill usage like mp cool down and it takes to much time for the development to takes place make the story more details
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Virgin idiot, Boring, No strong Hlfhlfhlfohfohdkhdgkdiydoyfhl 53583683tieyidiyehodohd8y2863khdhkegkelxkbeoyrouzoheoyelhxoye86dyoskge8tehodoy3iydkgeiteitsigeitshoeite8ydtue75etizgsmvzgieuparueoystiehkzkgzkvskgsoge
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The MC is given godlike powers in a Battle Royale and decides to be a good guy, giving away food, helping other people, refusing to use his literal GOD powers to mess with minds because he's afraid of betrayal. I don't know how anyond could be more useless with the powers of a literal god. First thing the MC does is hide in a box when he can literally create or do anything. That should tell you what kind of person the MC is. The author also regularly inserts political opinions, his troops are on the level of natural disasters and he gives them guns seemingly just as an excuse for the author to rant about his view on gun safety and gun control. Trash novel, Chinese MTL ones are better than this garbage.
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Having eaten until he was full, Neon thanked Mary and excused himself after assuring that he wouldn't go AWOL again without warning her first. He quickly got out of the house and went toward the academy. Stepping foot inside he could feel a certain tension in the air. Apprentices knights were gathered in small groups discussing something excitedly. Passing by them Neon noticed that it was mostly those who nearly completed their apprenticeship. Feeling curious he sped toward Nick office.

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"Aku suka kamu." jawab Saki cepat.
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"You're dead" said God
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"Aunt Petunia, there's one more store I want to visit before going back home," said Harry casually.
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The opening has now been fully released with lots of positive feedback. Thank you all so much for commenting, reviewing, and most of all just reading. I hope you all continue to follow my stories through the release.
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Man, this is a true masterpiece in this genre, have a lot of funny moments I hope for a romance, but I don't think will have. I hope that this book have more readers. 10/10                                                              
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I must say the characters are quite well written. The world building is very well done and it keeps you wanting for more. Really love how much detail the author has put into the story doing it just right, neither too much not too less. Will I recommend this yes

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