A Concubine’s Competitive Life in the Prince’s Household - Reviews

I liked the concept, but honestly it makes no sense to put an 8 year old kid. You could have just put 18 year old guy instead of an eight year old and it would have been quite fun. I am also seeing possible signs of grooming and underage love line forming. There are also some plotholes. The system sign in reward was missed, and there are no details given regarding how some traps were made, and how sometimes, the plot seemed to have jumped past few details.Unlike what some comments are saying, racism is not shown (at least till ch 40) other than China being where the MC was reincarnated in. But still no clue why the novel was picked with all these possible danger flags.

Is this novel ever going to be translated? It's a good novel.. . . . . . . .  . . . . .  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . ..  .. . . . . . .

So: a really good premise and an interesting ability. Special forces and an ability that can multiply or reduce the laws of physics and other peoples powers, which gives a solid base to build a story on.Character design: Starts out really good, the MC seems well thought of. But then the "legal loli" appears and he turns into a horn dog. She pampers him, he is - this close to fudging her and what the heck happened to my nice story and the good premise?World Background: Actually great, well thought of and interesting.Writing Quality: Pretty good for a Webnovel.

This book is awesome just like other books the author has written, the plot is great and the grammar is nice and easy to read......... Not good with words but the book is recommendable. I hope you win the contest and if you don't, please do not drop it due to disappointment or whatever.

A pleasurable masterpiece, with a well-arranged story, developed, the character design splendid, well thought out updating stability and a fitting background.

As there's only 6 chapters out currently this will be negatively influencing the review FOR NOW.This is my opinion and personal preference only.The story starts out like many others, but not exactly like them, it's changed just enough for it to not be another boring cultivation novel generic start. My personal preference is that I don't get slapped with text walls of world background, or extensive family knowledge, that's quite unnecessary and can be pushed until later in the story. The author does this well as he gives just enough information to catch your attention but not overwhelm the reader. (Had to give 1* for lack of world background FOR NOW) Our main character wasn't an all powerful God-like being before his death, but a man who just wants to live eternally through his accumulation of alchemy knowledge. Which is great because he doesn't get everything he wants, and learns a lesson that not everything in life is attainable, even through hard work and dedication.The author does a great job at making a story well written even though English is not their native language. You may find grammatical errors here and there but they will in no way effect CURRENTLY getting the jist of the sorry.Overall I believe that this novel is a good read which has potential, it's not poorly written or pumped out with glaring errors just for something to be read. I can't wait to see more chapters and I have added this to my library.

An isekai novel! This genre is my favourite. Its quite interesting how the Mc can only use guns in a fantasy world. Well this is the first time I've read a novel in first person POV. The writing quality is decent and the Author has described the thoughts of Mc very effectively. I like how the world building is done thus far.Overall a 4.8 star review for this new novel. As this is not like those typical fantasy magic novels, I recommend that readers be patient and give it a try.

*cough* *cough* "damn i wasn't in right place at the right time... " The man look left and right, but only to see a dead man hanging between his field of view.

انقدر رفتم تا از اون مکان دور شدم.

'AHHHH i finally found you my precious jewels. hehehehe now i would have a wonderfull weekend. Me my books and my bed. My hardwork payed off finally' Aria grinned while looking at the new arrival at novel'shelf in the book store. This was her favourite place ever since she first read Forty rules of love by Elif Shafak, she became her avid fan and even placed an order for her other novels. And now she finally could read her another novel named "the bastard of istanbul". She couldn't wait to reach home and start reading it as it was weekned and her exams had ended a day before and now there wouldn't be anyone disturbing her precious time reading novel.

"Huh? Loli? But anyway, still 10 is almost 15 years old, ha-ha-ha"

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