Another trash urban story. Beta male who gets pushed around. Unreasonable in-laws as per usual. Misunderstandings left right and center to create drama and tension.
Lack of intelligence of the author = stupid and badly written characters. Premise was fine but the stupidity of MC is through the roof and ruins everything else.
I've read the first 10 chapters and I already got hook! Some of the chapters made me laugh. This made me enjoy. Loving every bit of the story and I'll definitely finish this masterpiece!!
Already 500+ chapters in. I do think the novel is interesting and for those who rated the novel thrash when they themselves haven't read past 50 simply don't know what they're talking about. Period.The plot itself is really similar to swallowed star and took a bit of time to really flesh out all the interesting parts. Tho sometimes I had to read a paragraph repeatedly cause the author likes to info dump mid sentence and left it for the reader to connect the dots if they wanna make sense of it. Then again, it's still bearable for me. As for why i considering dropping the novel after investing in so many chapters is because the author had the audacity the repeat the same plot, where mc is thrown into a nearly identical prison dimension, with a beauty surnamed Bai, and the only solution was to cultivate a dual cultivation technique which was taught by MC's pet that cling on him 24/7 because the Mc was too dumb to figure it out, with the same punchline where the beauty calls him a pervert and what not. Now imagine having to read that nearly exact same set of circumstances twice. Imagine how fking unoriginal, cringe and lazy the author must be to come up with such a brilliant idea. At this point the author prolly just milking word counts for some money.
Was a free reader until about three months ago. Stuff happened, didn't have time to read (got up to chapter 1600 or so). Came back, suddenly, BAM! paywall. Ruined the whole experience.Would not recommend due to 90% of the story being locked away.
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