A Beginning To Her Ending - Reviews

Great world backround, very interesting take on the dimensions idea & ascending worlds idea! Terrible characters tho, they are just absolutely terrible, especially the Protagonist! I'd recommend if u don't focus on Protagonists but the world backround more. But if u read books and care about that Protagonist too then don't read this one because this is a Protagonist with down syndrome. All in the name of "Character development" But this isent character development he is just a retard who is mentally Weaker than everyone else & will never get over his high-school crush & is one of the weakest mentally MC's you'll ever find. Of course he still suddenly becomes mentally rage whenever someone messes with the girl he likes tho as he is a SIMP!!!

An amazing story so good that I never wanted it to stop❤️

the story is nice to read with interesting developments but well here comes the problem...after so much time all the heroines have become much stronger a ..and that's good ..but why the f**k is the mc still weak...he had so much time but barely improved..the author has purposely weaken the mc so as to display the awesomeness of the heroine but the mc is a massive turn off to read ....not to mention his simp like character ....the plot is good ..the interactions are good but the mc...is a disappointing trash..

*I've written this review after finishing chapter 216.* I really enjoy the world and the idea of the story, but the characters involved ruin it for me. The mc is always saying that he's the strongest and he only uses some percentage of his power and in the next fight, he whines about being powerless. When he was supposed to have shown crazy power in a fight he immediately says that other people are catching up to him. He is also a mixed bag of emotions. One second he says that he doesn't need anyone and he can take on the world by himself and he hates everybody. The next he cries to one of the many ladies that throw themselves at him that he needs love and trust. He literally treats everyone else in the novel like trash and then they all fall in love with him because he's strong even though he is a disgusting, abusive psychopath and they all admit it every so many chapters.Maybe I'm just worked up because chapter 216 brought this to a point for me, but either way, I can't keep reading.

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This book seemed very unassuming but surprised me in the best ways and almost sucked the soles off my boots with the way it flatters my taste in reading. It does go a bit too much into information for my own personal tastes, but it doesn't escape the story for too long before you're sucked back in and latching onto the mc's carapace for the ride. I do love the matter-of-factly attitude of the mc and although every story crowns it's mc as the final survivor, I'm still gripping the edge of the seat with an iron grip of my clenched cheeks and awaiting the outcome of our beloved mc. Thank you Author for going through the pain of your mind uterus and giving birth to this beautiful story

Nice Story! Love the idea of cultivation but many things remained unexplained. Well, it has only seven chapters now, so I can not judge it. Waiting for more chapters

Just a fair warning the author has a major NTR fetish.What was once an engaging second-chance, slice-of-life sports novel—focusing on the protagonist's growth both as a footballer and as a person, experiences he never had in his first life—has now devolved into a story driven by cheap drama. The second-chance theme feels redundant, the slice-of-life moments are bleak, and the sport itself has taken a backseat, now serving almost as filler.The girl he starts dating in chapter 39 NTR's him roughly 300 chapters later.We find out the MC is pure rubbish in bed and that the girlfriend even joins the roommate with two prostitutes/random girls... And whats our MC doing during all this? Probably spending his evenings staring at a blank wall for all we know.Even after everything transpires, the roommate and ex-girlfriend face zero repercussions for their actions and are actually rewarded for being terrible people.1) Does he or she get an STD considering he's been sleeping with multiple girls every night? - No. 2) Does she get outed for cheating on her Boyfriend? No. 3) Does the roommate end the relationship after he had finished cucking the MC? - No.4) Are there any repercussions for sleeping together behind his back for months? - NoIn summary, they start dating and live happily ever after, whilst the MC is forced out of the club because the author has to rely on cheap drama to progress the plot whilst overshadowing the actual story.

A good review for a good start hehehe. Brother MoonZkun is such a cheater he made a review first i told him that to wait for me.. Keep continue your novel mr author we support you. Kukukuku. If you gonna make another LN i like pokemon stuff the older generation and maybe danmachi for fanfic or anything with a game attribute or system kukuku. Just saying if you had a mental block issue for future. Thanks for the novel

         Rei hastily looked at the box and began searching for a weapon. He found an iron short sword with a little rust at the tip and took it, deciding it was the least ruined.

As it was, they were just another anonymous genin team among hopefully scads of those escaping.

Vey gave a grin, a slight chuckle and a shrug. "Never did, but just you wait, my fairy."