Beautiful! splendidly beautiful! story has great progression with the necessary elements, a proper balance in character design and great dialogue. With proper update stability, all points scored! ??nice work author
Nice character descriptions and a generic but still fun opening that gives a good background description of the MC. The story seems pretty good so far, and I'll continue reading, it looks like the MC is proactive, which I like.
It's going good actually. Kai told Vanessa try this thing with me where i open the bag and don't touch it. You know to have more control and stuff. So far i've been able to control myself a little bit. But i always end up giving into it anyways.
