Yaoi love - Reviews

need more chapters more chps exp exp exp exp  I love it I want a little more romance but I'm loving it ??

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its worthy!!! this book is totally blowing me. and make me so excited to read and read again. im so glad i've read this book and now im learn something about this book

translation quality isn't the best. sometimes i think that some parts were mtl-ed and edited. overall standard i played this game before and reincarnated/transmigrated into the game world. author (or translator) sometimes over complicates what should have been simple explanations and that kills reading flow. considering what i read so far and that novel is over 1k chapters, i can't find myself to keep reading it. just too tedious for mediocre story.

The plot is just okay, from the first chapter it's kind of somehow but as it goes it gets interesting...Do not get discouraged that u don't understand what it's all about in the first chapter, just continue and you'll understand.Good job author

The novel is well written. The chapters feel a little wordy to get through and there's a lot of information given, but it's interesting. The power system also feels fresh and interesting.

Honestly one of the best books I’ve read on this platform. Though it’s a shame it had to be dropped I commend the author for their efforts.  

1 chapter in and i couldn't force myself to read more...the writing quality is horrendous enough to cause a headache. I'm aware that english isn't the author's native language, but even a cursory skimming at chapter 1 will reveal atleast 50+ mistakes...and its not just grammatical mistakes, there are even mistakes for something as basic as gender mentions: where the MC is referred by "her" instead of "his" a lot of times in just the first chapter...Still this is not the worst english writing i've read, but its almost reaching the worse ones...And about the "English is not my 1st language" excuse, although i've seen countless authors use that i still don't understand how that logic works...You're writing on an english platform, so you should atlest learn basic English grammar and writing skills before you decide to post a half-as*ed story and not use more advanced and difficult words to make is easier on yourself...Thats all.?

72 chaps are still not enough. I binged but I still need more.This is definitely another good read from Aoki_Aku.10000% recommended!

"What little brother we were both released into this world at the same time!" said Old man Qin angrily.

"That doesn't matter to me!"

I offered to walk the kid home and actually get to know him a little. I don't see him around much, and not much to know I guess.you only here rumors about his family and how odd they are. No one ever explained how though.