Yandere Megami No Hakoniwa - Reviews

Wow! I've read the first few chapters and I have to admit that I'm hooked. Dave, do your thing quick

This review is at chapter 80:So my gripes are similar to the others you see in the reciews, but I have a slightly different take. At chapter 25 or 26 the MCs intelligence for some reason takes a steep decline out of literally nowhere. From a veteran gamer who hoards loot just incase he can sell it, to an idiot who questions why his companion brings him an item he can sell, whilst he carries around a pack full of starter grade junk for that exact purpose. My issue isn't the stupidity, as I like character development, it's the reasoning. The author obviously knows the MC is acting stupid, as he had his companion call him out directly for it by having her tell him to pay attention when he is told something and to think for himself. I simply find myself questioning, who is the author trying to develop/write for in this situation? It makes the MC seem mentally disabled, makes the companion seem like she nonstop complains, annoys the reader, and makes the author look like they can't write a decent character. I've found myself letting it audible sighs while reading.All this being said, it's not enough to ruin the story for me, but I know it can for some which is why I explained so much. I see the potential and have heard it gets better soon, so I'll keep reading as most of the other stuff in the novel is quite good and leaves me wanting to see more.

strong guy takes possesion of a new and weak body a lot of time after his defeat, in other novels the mc just goes on their faceslapping journey, this guy intead bothers with information gathering and testing to make his knowledge up to date, and while gathering power in secret he needs to pay attention to not leave any track of his works because he is not yet the smartest or strongest in the continent. thats a pretty good thing for me

leaving 5 stars because so far your books keep me going. Thank you for working so hard to provide reading material during these times. Gives me something to look forward to everyday

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The synopsis has the hook that I'm looking for, and for the love of god, my head ached when I read about genetic engineering. Although I hesitated to read it as I'm not interested on any science-y novels, the way the author wrote this story flat out slapped me with the reality. I shouldn't judge without reading the contents lol and that's how good this is. I'm actually waiting for the next chapters, so I expect a chapter soon! THIS IS A MUST READ!

I didn't read this book yet, but the name reminds me of that book about a guy that reincarnated as a stick in a game world .--. so I will read this too :3

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The way this story is developing is really good and I like how the MC evolves. I also like the way you wrote the book. This is a good read, keep up the good work.?

"Think they'll keep her locked in?"

Silk took it gratefully, "thank you. I'm a lucky man."

"Something moved! Mia, prepare the trap. Rhett, you protect her while Harel and I hold its attention. It may have hidden companions, so stay on your guard."