Wrath - Reviews

Looking for stupid MC? Looking for "I will do stupid things and get a setback but it will be fortune for me, MC? Then this novel is for u! *Clap clap*

Hello, this is author.Actually, this is not my first story on this web. I failed some and trying to get this story done. But I need your help to support this story from now, so I can get real to finish this one. Even a little support like liking the tag is quite much to help me get enthusiastic to continue the story.

Honestly it could be better, besides the cover art you can’t really imagine what most of the characters look like for example, I don’t know what you want me to imagine when it comes to Sophia or Grin Scurvy as you didn’t describe what they look like as a character

Alright, decided to review as I've gotten a feel of the story and its direction a littleThe grammatical errors dampen this novel a bit, nevertheless it's readable and the plot is interesting. The few chapters that I've read have been good despite the errors. English isn't the author's first language and considering that, the author has honestly done a good job.My advice would be to find an editor to help you with this as it will go a long way in adding more life to your novel. Besides that, the development of the story and the world building has been beautifully crafted. Hope you keep on writing and getting much better, this novel has a ton of potential. I'll be reading and showing my support author.

Then, those archers meet the same fate with their colleagues, the mage knight, having a magical cursed engraved into their soul and body. Enslaved by Nindya without prior notice.

Kemungkinan itu salah satu tetua dari kuil petir sampai bisa merubah chakra di sekitar mereka untuk membuat hewan buas takut dan tidak menghalangi perjalanan mereka,tapi untuk sebuah tetua turun gunung kemungkina hal besar akan terjadi dan di lihat dari arah tujuan mereka mungkin sama denga kita benteng iguana kemungkinan besar adalah perang wilayah dengan bangsawan dari benteng meminta bantuan dari kuil petir.

"But you didn't," I growled back as she grabbed me by my shoulder and shoved me to the wall.

"Yes your highness," Frasier said, pulling out a data disk. "I have it with me right here."

'My precious body, don't worry I won't let anything happen to you.' He whispers encouragingly to himself before giving me a dirty look and walking off in the direction he came from. I drop to the floor,, well not literally this time guys, relax. I'm just a BiT shocked and dying of embarrassment. I'm there in the middle of an unknown building hugging my legs and swearing to myself. Today really isn't my day.

They don't even sing that well.   

With a slight smile, she walked up in front of Xiao Wu and nodded towards her. Xiao Wu subconsciously handed her the crystal. Bright white light once again appeared, although it did not have the intensity of Tang San and Xiao Wu. Still, it absolutely surpassed the twenty fifth rank spirit power level, appearing to be about twenty sixth rank or so.

you wouldn't won't to Miss it very interesting